The Galaxy of the Force

The Galaxy of the Force
A star wars RPG!

Wednesday, November 5, 2008

Self Evaluation Blog #2

My only big error was a sentence fragment. I made other errors, but they were mainly forget apostrophes. I also once messed up the tenses. The sentence fragment, amusingly enough, was there because I accidentally put a period where I meant to put a comma, lol. As it was, it didn't have a subject!
I found that writing more in draft one, making it more organized and closer to a final draft made it so I got precise reviews, and was able to make smaller and more exact changes, rather than a full reformat of the paper. I also found that its really hard to stick to a subject when you want to write about something else entirely. A couple of times I almost erased my entire paper and started over. If it wasn't for lack of time, I probably would have!
I've never had too much trouble with grammar, mainly because of the fact that I've been using computers for so long. But I also never really thought it was that important, because it was fixable. I've always thought that what was in the report was most important. Well, that and that the writing style attracts the readers attention.
I used lots of different things in this draft, mostly the conclusion strategies. I always hated introductions and conclusions. They were the hardest for me to iron out. The handouts were very useful for me in forming them both quickly and easily. Or at least more easily than usual!

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